This is a very good abstract image attempt. You have some interesting circular shapes and you have positioned the subject nicely off centre to create a well balanced shot. The background is blurred just enough to let us know what it is without being too intrusive.
Watch out for distractions, like the the white bit in the top left corner. You can deal with this afterwards with software by cropping the picture or cloning it out, or you could get even closer when you take the picture if your camera will allow it.
Keep up the good work.
edies: Thanks Chunter, to stop and gave some tips for my pic. I'll try to implemet in next time.
Yeah the distraction is a bit of an issue here, but that said it a really good photo. The fact that you picked up on something so mundane tells that youv'e got a good eye. Well done